What is Worth FIghting for

HOPE ONE WAY

People in world need Hope, and Hope is only one way for many. The way for Hope for in Africa is the way to food. But there is only a few ways for them to get food and the main way is if people give them food, Also Hope for many people around the world is shelter as well as food but mainly for for food and shelter that is needed is in Africa.

People in England need Hope because of the rioting that was taken place. Houses were robbed and Shops were destroyed a long the streets. Even some people lost their lives. This was horrible thing that took place in England. It lasted five long days and five long nights until it finally came to a end, the days that it took part in were 6 of August to the 10 of August. Five people had lost their lives because of others rioting and over 16 people were injured, but the police men that tried to stop this monstrosity had the most injured in a total of 186 police men. Those men risked their lives to save others and stop others who were rioting. those many people that were rioting had destroyed so much. They destroyed buildings, flats (apartments), houses, and in total from those rioters they destroyed an estimated amount of two hundread million in property damage. This amount of money in property damage took place in London, Greater Manchester, Merseyside, West Midlands, Bristol, and many more places.

When 15th of August had reached 3,100 people had been arrested across the Mother Land and 1,000 people had been charged from the damages the had caused. Vehicles, homes, and shops were attacked and destroyed from people that were rioting. At least 100 houses were destroyed so many people had most their homes due to that. In one small part of London there was so much damage cause that the shop owners came together to see how property damage was cause and it was million of pounds. On August 9th Transportation offices were closed down because of what people had done. Some people had burned double decker busses, some had burned and put graffiti on peoples cars. So in London they took action to stop this monstrosity and closed it down until they had further notice in the rioting.

So this is what I think is worth Fighting for HOPE. There was hope that was needed in England when the Rioting had taken place for now the People of England are lucky that it had stopped.

Since I am Not sure how to have Eric post a comment this is his comment below:

I really like the fact that you used an example such as an event that had taken place in England, which was a riot. You also said that people in Africa need hope due to the fact that there were only little ways to achieve food. However, I was wondering, is it the 'hope' that they need? I could also be 'help' and many different others. In opposite, you gave a nice example which was 'main way is if people give them food'. I feel that as well. Basically, everything was organized in a structure that was need for it to be a paragraph. However, you could have given some more specific details concerning about each paragraphs or a concluding sentence. In addition to that, it might have been better if you had used a quote sumarizing the essay or quoting what this essay is going to be about. It is because it gives the readers basic information for them to understand the essay easily.